All Comments on 'Visions Unveiled Ch. 07'

WOW! I see now what you meant in that Faline will go where she will. Great chapter. :)

Awesome. More please.....don't make us wait great story

Faline should stop and think before she runs off and get herself into trouble. Its understandable she is confused but Shane has yet to do anything to hurt her. He already had plenty of times to do her harm if he wanted to.

The only thing Shane can do is continue to help Faline, anything he says now is perceived to be untrue because she thinks he is guilty just by being related to Justin.

Faline is one annoying ass female lead. She jumps to conclusions with out thinking first and she's very erratic. One second she knows that Kellan is safe and the next she's running away from Shane?!? She makes no logical sense at all. I understand fear and confusion when there's logic behind the feelings but Faline is being highly illogical

I have been enjoying this story but I am starting to dislike Faline. Hopefully she becomes more likeable as the story progresses or at least less annoying.

Just needs more character depth and connection as lovers soon. Really good story

This story is really good, but long gaps between updates may alienate readers... Perhaps the best strategy is to post only after the whole story is completed. Either way, this story definitely deserves to be finished, it is quite amazing, and I really hope no harm will befall Faline and Shane, despite her temporary stupidity... Can't wait for a happy ending! :)

Hey, what's with the long pause? we are waiting impatiently for continuation of this story - don't let us hang in there - pleaaaaase

I am still here, and this story is still happening. I have had a few months of setbacks which included two deaths (one sudden and tragic) and the need to work 60+ hour weeks. I hate that I have had to neglect this for so long, but hope very much in the upcoming weeks to update a new chapter. I am thankful for the patience and support of e-mails and comments I continue to receive. Please, I hope you continue to bear with me a bit longer. xo ~ib

Still waiting for the rest of this series. Please, don't forget us and leave us hanging, In your own time. Peace be with you.

I hope everything is ok and you will be updating soon. :)