All Comments on 'Visitation Rights Pt. 02'

by SweetDesire427

Sort by:
  • 5 Comments
seth6138seth6138over 9 years ago
Wow

You nailed it!

SweetDesire427SweetDesire427over 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you for reading and the feedback. Now to decide what to do next...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
What Next?

I love your writing, and this story is very hot. What I want to know is- do they get back together? Does Jamie maybe find out? Another baby would add a twist, and lead to kinky pregnancy stories. I can't wait to see what you do!!!

OleguyOleguyover 9 years ago
Wow !

As another commenter said 'you nailed it'

Nuff said.

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 9 years ago
That is so hot

Like the relationship sideline fucking is good for both. Gives her the release she so greatly needs. They should do a few things that they didn't when married... or bring in the girlfriend..

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous