All Comments on 'Visiting Gotham'

The errors in spelling and grammar were a little distracting, but I still really enjoyed this one. The sex scene was great (but still could've used a little more detail ;) , plus it had Harley. Wish there were more stories like this one.

Please write a second one and maybe a longer version? Thanks it was great!

I've been enjoying your stories for a while, in the Gotham series could you consider doing a story where Poison Ivy uses her plants to take advantage of a guy, such as tentacle vines with mouth. Like openings at the ends or something? I know it's weird but it'd be hot lol

When Harley shot the guns in the air, you put the bang bang bang in quotes like she said it. Try using italics for actions.