All Comments on 'Visiting My Father'

Love this story yes it's twisted but so am I it would appear

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Damn I cant wait for the next part

Implausible fiction but so fucking nasty! Loved it - more please!

Very naughty and was great to read about a strong young woman who is very determined to get what she wants out of lifeh

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Please give us the second part ASAP!

Thank you all for the feedback, it is greatly appreciated.

Such a horny and dirty story,,,I loved it,,,hope there's a sequel when she's pregnant.

God this so perverted, and pushed a lot my buttons! I hope there's more, especially with Kris!

Would love more on what she does with hubby - Kris.

So many possibilities!!! Dad, daughter,trans and now the bartender. They could have a great time. Please share the next chapters. It got the juices running!!!!

One of the best taboo stories I have read in a long time!! more please :)

One of the best incest stories EVER! MORE Please.

Hate to spoil your string of good reviews. But I didn't like it. Is there anything that doesn't make that woman's pussy wet? She probably gets moist doing her taxes. And if anyone winked at me as much as that barmaid I would have thought they had something in their eye. I didn't like the gay stuff, skipped most of it. Wrong category. Although the beginning warned of "pee play" I read on because I didn't know what it meant. Now that I know I should have turned back. One other thing- a persons anus should never be called a shithole. It's not sexy. Just gross. Just like this story.

Great story. Love it.

Would love to read more about what she does with neighbor boy when she returns home.

And HAVE to know if her Dad gets her pregnant.

You are now my favorite author. I love every nasty taboo thought you have shared with us. Thank you so much for your writing and please don't ever stop.

Nasty is the way it should be. This little tale sure got my freak on!

Oh boy, I wasn't ready for that. Although Kris did give me a clue. I guess I am as naughty as your characters. We need to read more of daddy's escapades with his daughter and Kris.

If only you could have used an editor. The subject matter was good. It dragged out way too long. I thought perhaps his helper's cock would be involved. Altogether a bold attempt. Please try again!

Family sex can get really wild. This one kept me hard and covered most the bases of perversions and the nastiness of the sex scenes was quite arousing. A better edit would make it a better read.

Love it. Except the "give me a baby" impregnation parts. I just cannot wrap my head around this fetish / fantasy. It fucks with my libido while reading because in this type of fantasy thoughts of the having the result (child) invade my brain which is not erotic to me., the idea of raising said child. Don't understand this kink. And I'm furthest thing from prude or being closed minded. I think. Maybe someone can articulate to me what arouses and turns them on about the idea being impregnated during wild, random sex fantasy?

Eww David.