All Comments on 'Visiting the McIntoshs'

Lack of the basic skills in English turns the reader off on the first page.

When I found this story, its counter read "0 views". Yet there are already two comments. Both have nothing to do with the story; it's well written (maybe somebody has got problems with British English) and not sick in the least. After a quick look around I saw the same "sick"-comment under another story as well. Just ignore!

Saw the same pathetic W A R comment in another piece too.

Nowhere in the story was there ever any indication that she was going to be raped.

And they want to be taken seriously ??

Witty story, but have to admit the closest I get to whine is the noise I make when I see the price of it in Tescos..:-)

This W.A.R. Associate bloke has either not read the story or has ignored its comical overtone.

And yes, I see: whine/wine. My apologies about that, but since English isn't my mother tongue, those mistakes are quickly made during the writing process and easily missed during the proofreading.

Venom

Heh...heh. Kinda classic. Still, I think you put it on the wrong website. Most of the people here are looking for something definitely sex-related.

i have absolutely no idea why .... but i loved this story .

totaly nuts .. sooo wrong , yet sooo right ..

xxxhugsxxx