All Comments on 'Visitor from the Mothership Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wonderful

Love the story AND sex scenes thus far. Perfect blend imho. =]

barepussloverbarepussloverabout 10 years ago
Loving This Story Line - Powerful!

Waiting patiently for the next chapter. Little confused as to number of eggs brought forth each time. Seems Cat had fourteen then sixteen from the same encounter. Do the number of eggs represent the height/depth of experience organism? He truly is a miracle worker with these aliens/humans. :-)

WriteFriend3WriteFriend3about 10 years agoAuthor
@Barepusslover

I understand your confusion about the number of eggs. That was actually a mistake on my part. I changed it to fourteen when I edited it for the website and realized after my submission that I didn't change the later parts to reflect that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
You're doing great!

Keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
KEEP IT GOING!

Very rarely have I found authors on this website that instill a desire to see their writings continue, but I can say beyond all certainty that you are definitely one of them. I've fallen in love with this series and hope to see you write many more chapters! A++++!!!

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