All Comments on 'Viva La Gloria'

God thats hot.

You never disappoint in telling a stonking good story . thank you

J

Another slight change of direction, WP, and an interesting and enjoyable one. I liked some of the early banter between the girls and Christine's mother was cool to the point of being able to sink the Titanic. Long may your muse smile upon you, WP, although I'm not sure which Muse it should be (Thalia perhaps, the Muse of Comedy?). Whichever one, don't let her get away.

I really enjoyed your story, and can see how it could turn into a longer series. I can also see how a series of these shorts could end up being just as satisfying. Keep up the good work, Five Stars!

I liked it, not much of a build-up but that's alright it had some build-up

Such a wonderful, sexy story. Loved it. Liked the pace of it and the coupling was so erotic. More like this would be a treat.

Love it! Love it! Love it! And i would LOVE some more

I really enjoyed this story. Then again I usually always enjoy your stories. Maybe down the line some time u might return to these characters. One can always hope.

I love this coupling, Christine and Gloria are certainly Extraordinary Girls, or you could say She's a Rebel of both of them ;)

Seriously though I loved this story, I have read the finished article three times now and it just gets better.

There may not have been much backstory but we saw enough of the characters to be able to create our own backstory for them. Maybe you could revisit these characters again in the future. Perhaps give us a glimpse of another day in the life of Christine and Gloria. As always, thank you for sharing your stories with us.

I think there ought to be a sequel in the works. Only this time, starring the mom.

how cool is the mom to let her daughter engage in these kinds of couplings under hers? The lack of background isn't an issue. Not every story needs to be a biography nor do people need to have known each other for years. The characters were still given enough personality and just clicked in a situation that didn't have to be mapped out.

I really enjoyed this story, and would, quite frankly, enjoy reading another chapter or three of it ;) Thanks for sharing it with us!

Very erotic

Superb characterization and dialogue. With almost no background on any of the people, you bring them to life and get us intensely interested in their lives and love.

The mum is a superstar.