by vixvenus
you've got me hooked!!! you're way if writing is very captivating! please don't stop!
can't wait for the next chapter, would be even more awesome if they could just a tiny bit longer...... :)
please know that you're a wonderful writer!!
Please keep writing! I need to know what happens. Also what happens with your other story, “She’s Mine” Please!!!
As I suspected when I started reading chapter one, 30 minutes ago, this is an unfinished work, which might have had a chance to be good, if the work ethic would have matched the raw skill.
Too bad, but just another wanna be writer, discovering it's a hell of a lot of work to write wellkks
@wildwood55, you have a nerve. Someone gave you FREE entertainment, talented, by your own admission, and instead of thanking them you just slag them off. Have you produced anything worth sharing yourself? Have you considered that this person's health or circumstances might have changed? You sound so selfish.