by SomeSubmiss
I was deeply engaged by your story, It was tantalising and refreshing. You use language easily and seductively. If the purpose of these stories is to excite, this story worked a treat with me. More than all of that, it was fun. Delicious fun. You are a very capable writer in this genre and if it pleases you, it would please me (and I imagine many others) to read more of your work. Beautifully done. I would feel very proud if I were you.