by HandcuffGirl
I really like your stories. The grammar is good, the attention to detail is great, and the mythology you maintain is fantastic. You're a very good author... thank you.
Nggh. I like your stories a lot, and this was no exception... until the end. Hot, hot, this is getting good, BOOM! fast forward, everyone is perfectly normal. ffffffff-
I have to admit, i love the Vong stories alot. I love the bondage with the "creatures", it sounds so..exciting and different. Excellent stories!
I loved this story and I'd really love chapter 5 and more with Jaina returning to submit fully to the house Lah.