by DianaP
WOW that was the best story I have read on this site ever!!!
What amazing, and artful work. I truely appreciate a good story and this was no exception. This takes the cake! Keep up the good work and please write a sequel if you could, I would be the first to read it.
Crazy good...enjoyed this so much! A non-cerebral, from-the-gut, critique? = "kick-ass!"
Nothing on lit is better than this for content, for style for overall page turning enjoyment. The only problem I have with it is...it's over. I do hope there's more of your work around here. Thanks for sharing your brilliance this way:)
When I first noticed the length of your story, I was really weary of reading it, but in the end, it turned out to be a wonderful story.
It wasn't massively arousing, but it was extremely well written, and followed a coherent and logical plot (and if you notice, there's too many "I'm a rogue plumber, let's fuck" stories around).
Your writing is amazing.
an unusual story. Well written, an imaginative plot, and enough suspense to last for a while.
This story is truly exceptional. Would very much like to read more of your talented work, but see that you have not published on this site for about 10 years now. Hope you are still with us. If so, is more of your work to be found elsewhere?
At least the second time reading. Continues to be one of the best of it’s class on the site. Many thanks again for the enjoyment.
Beautiful, so well written. Thank you. I enjoyed it from beginning to the end. It takes a lot these days for me to read a whole story. I guess in this face paced instant gratification world we live in now I want it fast and moving. Your pacing was fantastic and your heroine real and honest and everyone loves a fairytale ending. Just enough dark and sex to make it interesting and my panties wet but not enough to give me nightmares. Excellent. SubmissiveCeleste