All Comments on 'WACFYM Ch. 02'

As with all sequels, I prefer the original. But excellent job, I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Your first story was fantastic. The scenario here was maybe just a little ordinary and not truly nasty enough. Also, it would be great to spend more time on the sex (not at the expense of the build up though - that's top notch!) a bit of focus on the scenes of sexual betrayal.

But keep 'em coming. Please.

I agree with the other comments comments. The first stor was just nastier/more depraved (and better!) Maybe if the wife walked in on them and he didn't stop? Maybe if the kid walked in?

I think you might have toned it down based on the feedback of the first story, but please... bring it back up a notch. Love your writing style and buildup, but I know you're more depraved than this, and we should see it!

Still very fun read.

This was a great story but could be nastier.  Have the wife find out and the husband still choose someone else.  Or better have the husband eventually help the other woman.Keep up the great work!

I loved it This story got me into this whole genre. I love the end of the 3rd one more. So depraved and delicious. Please keep it coming!

This was the best in the series. Write more like this

I'M ADDICTED TO THIS SERIES!!!!

Odd but well written and interesting

YOU ARE FANTASTIC

THAT was fun! 5

Please! I love this fetish. There’s not enough of it on any sites :( x

I loved it, need more of Rob and his mistress. Should write about those three months

A masterpiece!