All Comments on 'WACFYM Ch. 05 Pt. 02'

by seducedHylas

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Awesome!

I love your stories. You understand that what makes these stories work is having a guy resist. My favorite part is the fact you have George resist the night before the wedding, everything seems fine, and then he still succumbs after the wedding.

Thanks for writing, seducedhylas. I appreciate all your contributions. Just ignore all the naysayers, please. There are plenty of us out here.

Just_the_tipJust_the_tipabout 12 years ago
Bravo

This is your best yet. The continuing resistance is superb and really adds to the build-up. My only constructive comment is that I would have liked to have seen the rest of the seductions of the groomsmen, but that's just because I like the way you write sex scenes and want to see more of them.

watchurmanwatchurmanabout 12 years ago
Another corker from the master!

Excellent addition to the brilliant WACFYM series. Seriously the most erotically charged stories on Literotica. The resistance is key and you do it so well. Would have loved to have known what Craig and Simon did to Quinn though! Keep it up Mr

Talon378Talon378about 12 years ago
Fantastic!!!

I have been following this series of stories and have to say that these stories are nothing short of incredible. Great writing, you really have a talent for painting a scene........

DjeterDjeterover 11 years ago
Keep writing

incredible!

NWlifterNWlifteralmost 10 years ago
Change up

How about something where the guy turns tables on the manipulative slut(s)? I think I'd be fun to see all that planning and manipulation fail horribly leading to the slut's defeat and humiliation.

These stories are pretty good but get fairly repetitive and a little boring.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

I love all the stories from seducedhylas. My top favourite amongst cheating husband authors. I wish you'll be back to write ote more

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