by XXscribbler
It’s funny how by the end of your tale, you can get into the rhythm of her speech and it becomes easier to read. Well done.
Unusual, well-paced, sexy.... A great story, look forward to seeing how this develops.
Had no problem at all , being Scottish, enjoying your tale.
It was easy to understand, I wear a Cochlear Implant too. Some people are very rude. Well written and touching. Thanks
This is such a cute tale. It would make a great short.
That is without a doubt one of the most creative uses of language I’ve encountered. What a treat to read! What fun! Linguistically delicious. *****+
A wonderful tale, and maybe the most unique I've read on Lit. A definite Five Stars! We do hope there is a sequel.
I agree with other readers.
The most interesting use of language.
Thoroughly enjoyable read. I'm looking for more.
All the best. Thankyou
People say they talk but nobody really listens so they don't understand. If reading speed was between 1 (slow) and 10 Fast) ... this slowed me down to around a 4 once my mind accepted her speech pattern. At this point their back and forth patter was enchanting! Interesting handling of a cute story.
What a GREAT idea. I got used to interpreting fairly quickly so could follow most everything. I could also feel the relaxing of Jeanz feelings as she began to feel the acceptance of herself as an incredibly sexy woman who was being valued like never before.
I REALLY hope you write some further episodes of this story!!!!