All Comments on 'Waiting'

by chocolatecherry

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
LOVE IT!!!

Outstanding story!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
yes,

JT had said that "that marriage's doomed from the start" to a few other beautiful, loving, and "exciting" white wives, too,,, there's a few of them around my poorer part of town, that is, beautiful and "loving" white women with two or three mixed kids who have DIFFERENT fathers,,,,

of course, that just proves these women are highly "desirable" and they attract a lot of the loving brothers, 'tis all. the author's story here is fictionalized, and I'm talking about real women in my neighborhood,,, two slightly different htings,,,

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good Story

I liked it. I hope you write another where she has even more babies. I look forward to 20 years from now where white women finally manage to breed the white race out of existence.

Write some more

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
a ral snorefest

i could hardly stay awake and could not finnish it zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Nice

A nice a gentle story - a good read

naturemadenaturemadeover 15 years ago
literally

Made me cry.

This might be because I'm currently trying to rid myself of unrequited love for a black friend of mine.

Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
OMG!

This was so sweet!! I almost was in tears at the end :) great job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Oh Dan!

I'm quite in awe of TJ, but Dan sounds like the sweetheart and the "one". I mean he was there for her during labor.

Great read.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I loved your story and will read some others soon. My TJ, or so I thought at the time was the first black man to ever fuck me, at 19, he was a married, black professor in Boston. It was great at the time, then it became apparent he had fucked many white coeds before and after me. Good for him, painful for a deluded young girl.

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