All Comments on 'Wake Me Up Ch. 02'

very hot, and i love the story being told from the points of view of Gabe and Wes.

One recommendation is to double check your usage of your and you're and there, their, and they're.

Keep up the great work!

Love the beginning and the backstory!

You really need to learn how to use: there, their, your and you're. The misuse of these distracts from your story. Keep writing though, the story is promising and the characters are likeable.

Can you please keep up the stories. I love them both. I love how you transitioned between Have and Wes

This story is Awesome! Hoping to see more soon.

You have to love all the dick-wad English majors critiquing the proper use of words, and complaining constantly about the need for an editor. They give most of us Gas Pains!!! This stuff is free. If you don't like what you are reading, or the grammar stresses you out to the point of distraction, kindly move the fuck along!!! Just saying!