All Comments on 'Walk-In Clinic Ch. 02'

Great addition to the story.

Good beginning to this story, I enjoyed it. Please add a few more chapters.

More please...femdom, sissy, medical fetish...dare I hope Bret has found a pair of mommies to use and humilate him?? Please don't leave us hard and hanging...

Can't wait for new chapters

Please continue! A real turn on to be caught by a neighbor that enjoys cross dressing guys and the invite of a freind was worthwhile too.

I cant wit for the nurses to use him at night I hope he gets ther in time or he will pay for being late I hope u continue the story

i was hoping the stoy would finish, but i cant wait for it. Please finish soon.

This is a really good story i love the humiliation. Dont stop countiue please.and inform me when the next chapter comes out please

OMG do not leave me like this. This sissy needs to know

What is next!

the next chapter please

This junk was never finished.

Chap 1 was entertaining - Crossdress/CFNM theme - watching "Missy's" life quickly spiral out of control as his private fetish and submissiveness were revealed and he elected to go with the flow was believable.

Chap 2 had quite a few different possibilities, from a happy ending to a dark abusive one. I'd have preferred one with him being forcibly feminized and given hormones at the party but eventually (assuming a Chap 3+) him volunteering for full TSR and then getting hired by the clinic for who knows what.

Sadly, the author didn't finish his first train of thought (the after hours clinic party) but instead derailed and tried to squeeze an entirely new idea into the window between first appointment and after hours party. Bad idea. The domme lezzy neighbor could have been introduced in a later chapter without causing reader whiplash.

Since the author skipped two years between Chap 1 and 2 and has been AWOL since 2008, I'm guessing we'll never know what his intention was.

Two more women bound for jail.