All Comments on 'Walk in the Park'

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TANSTAAFL58TANSTAAFL58almost 6 years ago

A great quick story. Will there be more? You've left poor naked Anna in the park bathroom all kinked up. She needs resolution!

Minor typo about halfway through ("thing" instead of "thin" describing the nipple clamp chain).

KitPiscesKitPiscesalmost 6 years ago
Loved it

Wonderfully erotic story. Caught being naughty is deliciously HOT. Would love to read a part 2 of this story. If not I'll just use my imagination. Please keep writing about what ever turns you on.

Trekkie469Trekkie469about 5 years ago
Great Start!

All your stories are great starts. Please start expanding upon them. Let's not leave Anna in the bathroom of the park forever.

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