All Comments on 'Walking'

You never made any reference to either being a virgin you also

said "dived" which isn't a word there could have been more of a build-up but those are just little things, the story was good.At least it wasn't just a "fuck" story I hate those things no emotion. Write more;)

Unrealistic waterfall, unrealistic girl reactions, after a few dates he fucks her at a "crystal waterfall"

0/10

Hope to see you improve.

It's a sweet story, even if it's not very realistic.

I bet my girly best friend will love it, I'll send her the link! :)

it is nice... not the best story around here, but still rather good. keep writing

OMG, AWESOME STORY. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. WRITE MORE LIKE THIS ONE

I read a comment saying it was realistic and she wasnt a virgin. it made me think of something.

It was there first time. it's in the "first time" section of this website. That doesnt have to mean a virgin's first time. It could mean, and this is what I believe, first time as a couple.

I loved it personally. if there was a rating between 75 and 100, I'd give it somewhere around 85-90. Always room to improve.

keep it coming

What a way to narate the story! the smoothly silkily the story moves. Tremendous!