All Comments on 'Wally Finds Out'

Counter that comment. I love the landing strip, keep em coming.

but now he needs a map. TK U MLJ LV NV

and thanks for another great read. Oh, and btw, I read my wife the blonde guy jokes and had her laughing out loud.

Again, thanks for your work and for sharing it with us.

Personally I would have liked more in the way of a confrontation with the wife. Maybe it's sadistic on my part, but I wanted to see more of an effort to save the smoking wreck of a marriage she had been so callously taking for granted. Still, I know you write for your own enjoyment so I'll just thank you for sharing your talent with us.

I got a chuckle out of the cup of coffee and two popcicles joke.

I kind of like the monetary strategy too. That was the refreshing thing about this.

I guess there are three things. I liked the 'twist' that the boss was forced to work with one of the exes. Talent is a rare commodity. If Tom and Claudia were doing good jobs, it seems wasteful to cast them aside without a burble. I like that this remained partially true.

Are totally hot for a middle aged guy with no prospects. Right. Go fuck yourself.

JPB is just trolling his heart out in his literary dotage, daring someone to take this submission seriously. Not me ....not again .

Thanks for the story, JPB, I really do appreciate it. It brightens my day a little when I can start with a story like this. Well done.

My only criticism is that it didn't wash my car or cut my grass, other than that, it did all the things a good LW story is supposed to do.

But, next time, try a little harder and see if you can at least get the grass cutting thing done, okay?

The dialogue was robotic. Your characters need to show more emotion. Try using facial expressions or tags that show what they are feeling.

Decent srory, but you do need an editor. Sooo many mistakes.

Why? There are some typical burn the bitch elements in this story, but Claudia didn't get totally burned: her career actually improved. Thomas got burned, totally, which is a typical element of BTB stories, but Claudia did OK.

I didn't give it a 5 because of too much jumpiness in the story segments, and there is a lot of implausibility in Wally continuing to copulate with Claudia for so long, just to maintain having a sex life, without Claudia noticing some change in his behavior. There was a subtle, unwritten undercurrent that Wally was actually getting off on knowing his wife was screwing around; otherwise, he'd never have been able to maintain screwing his wife that often, without her noticing something was wrong.

It wasn't mentioned, but Claudia had to be douching a lot, because any man is going to notice sloppy seconds.

Not your best. How could Claudia say it was just sex giving up thing she never gave him, and how or why would Sarah drop the sex even though she brought Claudia back to her office. Talent or not she wouldn't want that slut who ruined her marriage in her face and she even stopped screwing Wally. It doesn't compute.

Count me as a Landing Strip fan.

I don't know why, but it feels like I read this before.

That was a fun story. Can't you people just enjoy the ride? Thanks again, JPB. 5 stars.

Dear Anony,

While you moan and groan about Jpb's spelling mistake(s),what does Srory mean?

Thank you for a fun and entertaining read, JPB, it's always entertaining seeing which way you are going to take a story.

The Landing Strip also gets my vote.

5 stars just for the entertainment. Thank you for writing and always looking forward to your next story.

1st reduce your income level

2nd get divorced

3rd seek revenge

First is optional, but DO NOT mix up 2 and 3 or you will pay!

If you get her/him fired first then they come after you for support in the divorce

Thanks for the offering.

Howdy Bob,

Another good one. Some nice background and the jokes were cute too. You've never failed to please us avid readers. Keep your muse happy and satisfied or some good ole boy will whisk her away (BG).

Look forward to your next posting.

And we'll just have to write the sequel in our minds, I suppose -- the one wherein Cookie lives up to the promise of: "If I was yours I'd fuck your eyes out and be the best wife you could ever hope for."

Thanks for another fun read!

A good story, but sad. I guess that shows what a great writer you are, Bob.

I love stories that end with justice.

Before, but I'm not going to spend time tracking it down

She made it clear that she was available for sex while he was married, just because his wife was cheating. That's damaged goods and broken morality, and the exact kind of slut who will get revenge by slutting around if she mistakenly thinks you are cheating on her.

Also, way too many lame and extremely old jokes padding the story. Please don't do that again.

Not a true BTB tale but a great tale of consequences. Hopefully the ex-wife is really missing her husband and although her work is thriving, she is alone and lonely. The future is bright for our betrayed hero and he has nowhere to go but up.

Five Stars

Boy JPB keeps showing his talent. I'm glad he's back with his funny and convoluted stories. I know what the end would be. I just don't know how he will get me there. Thanks for keep writing for all us who admire and enjoy your work.

5*

Thomas wasn't that good of a CEO, Sarah found out she was not only better at it but she also enjoyed doing it.

So getting rid of him made sense for the business too.

Claudia was very good as an office manager, in fact being Thomas' PA (and lover) held her back professionally.

So from Sarah's POV it made sense to keep her on, besides the whole sexual harassment lawsuit prevention.

Sarah felt that it would be awkward to work directly with Claudia while having sex with her ex Wally, that is an emotional response - how do you argue emotions with logic? If you try it will be unsuccessful.

So Claudia doesn't get burned, but her ex has done well enough without her that she knows he is not sitting home crying over her.

Even if she isn't getting her nose rubbed in that her boss and her ex were getting together she would know that it had happened, and he landed on his feet after that ended.

If you are dealing with a narcissist making them see that you don't miss them can be great revenge.

That is where the saying 'Living well is the best revenge' is true.

JPB is a master of the art... I have to admit that I would have like to here Claudia's explanation of what advantage she would be bringing to her marriage by cheating...

Very cloudy part of the story after she reacted so negatively to being served...

Just read it! ⛦⛦⛦⛦⛦

I am thinking about compiling a joke book of the Landing Strip jokes! Oh, yeah, and this is classic JPB. I DID miss Hubby calling-out Sweetie about what she had been denying him ... and the death-planning!

5*

Good, solid story that one. 5 Stars.

A good angle with the lottery winnings. Most unclaimed winning tickets are lost, but i wonder how many go unclaimed to spite a spouse.

Also, I wonder if Sandra did any house cleaning at Benson Industries. It appears that it was common knowledge that Billings and Claudia were having an affair, but no one thought to inform the BOSS and CEO Sandra. The HR director at least should of because the sexual harassment issues,

I felt like I was left hanging at the end wondering what happened.

Wally got what he deserved, which was good.

It seems it's always the man who screws around on the woman. Nice to see the reverse and to see the reverse side of the divorce action (fictional or not).

For sharing.

5*****

Of a story we've all read a dozen times or more.

Just Plain Good

A hamburger, fries, and a coke. What Bob lacks in quality he makes up for in quantity. The more dramatic suspenseful and emotionally compelling part of the story is the part Bob left out: Why did a presumably good loyal intelligent wife become the bosses slut, and so blatantly that only the detached dumbshit husband, and the detached dumbshit wife, didn't know? Why did the wife even care that she was caught, since the evidence indicates she cared more for her asshole boss than she did for her husband? Yeah, she played the prostitute card, I did it for the money. So who else is she doing to save money? And the videos, which Bob did not describe, would show if she was simply providing a prostitutes business fuck, or it she was reveling and enjoying the sex with enthusiasm and passion. You would think the discussion regarding murder would be ample evidence to persuade the slut wife to accept getting fired with no harassment complaint tied to no murder conspiracy charges.

But all that would take so much more time and effort and THOUGHT. Bob just wanted a vehicle to tell jokes. Are you auditioning to become a joke writer?

Still, the fast food is better than the puke usually served up by the cuckorotica clique, so thanks for some fun easy reading. Just hate it when a prime cut of meat is turned into hamburger; what a waste.

We gonna get another story on these two? Looks like trouble in paradise

Same basic lines. Guy gets screwed by cheating wife. Some legal sturm und drang. Then he ends up with great pussy. Then gets together with a hottie. Yawn.

But the story slightly redeems itself with this gem. I did laugh out loud.

"I got up and let her sitting there. And I smiled knowing that when she got ready to leave she would find out that I hadn't paid the check and she as going to be stuck with it."

Same old same old. Give it up JPB. 1 star. Why write on an erotic story site and no sex.

A good read but @JPB has better stories...3*

appreciate a good story right now since too few new stories currently. It did have an ending at least more than too many JPB stories.

Please keep writing and I will keep reading.

Please! Write a Spy triller, or a National Hero, or something with a bit of bite, while still having The cheating wife fare and how he deals with her?

PLEEEEEEEEEZE NO MORE DEPRESSING STANDARD WIFE CHEATS, GETS CAUGHT

GETS SERVED ETC ETC ETC!

Thanks for sharing this good story with us!

Love you all! GREG.

OH 70 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

Really good story. But some of the jokes were lame. 5

I gave the highest rating because I want others to read your work. You're among the best on the site. Please keep writing. Panther fan.

Another good one from JPB

for a good old school bread and butter cheating wife story in a a hateful septic sea of wimpy wife sharing and humiliation fetish crap.

You are ALWAYS entertaining! - Claud137

His ex gets the promotion even after her betrayal of him, the company, and the ex husband of the company owner/CEO.

Meanwhile he rises to the level of blond jokes. Making him a punch line.

he back stabbed her, in return. good job done, ain't raised no cuck here.

Waste of time

thanks for sharing.

Claudia got a raise and promotion and didn't even lose her job. Her husband did not use the videos to his advantage with their family and friends. She had publicly humiliated him among her coworkers who spread the information all over the community. Yes, she lost the house; but so did he. She came out of the divorce actually better off.

That cheating slut really did come out of the divorce smelling like a rose. Better job and a raise, she just didn't suffer enough. And it would have been fun to hear how she took the knowledge of our hero's fucking her boss. And why would it have been such a bother to work with her while fucking our hero.. I mean, the whole point of starting the post divorce fuckfest was to cause reciprocal pain and humiliation. Having her work in the same office would have just made that more in your face for her.

You know, on some level Claudia may have in some twisted way thought that

she was doing it for them, or at least not depriving Wally of anything. He was apparently getting all of the pussy he wanted, and maybe he didn't push the anal and swallowing enough. After all, many women have a submissive side. Not trying to criticize JPB, but just trying to point out how narrow minded some critics are, they just they just want maximum BTB for every errant wife.

Good to see Jonny Carson's lawyers are still around.

Good entertaining story. I even liked the fact that Wally's wife wound up working for Sarah. But my primary concern is that "Open Mic Night" reappear in future stories. Great stuff.

Dewey system and howe. Ahhh the 3 stooges made that famous.

I never miss one of JPB's stories always a good read.

i enjoyed this story and it eve had an ending. see, i recognise the good and the bad davidclem628@gmail.com

Everybody knew? But yet you and Sarah never suspected a thing when the corporate president and his assistant had to go on out of town meetings? Those assignments are supposed to be relegated to his underlings. Thats why they were hired in the first place. Now this are not dumb people were speaking about. As president, he would have learned something by now. And Claudia was a very smart woman as Sarah attrested to that even taking her in as her personel assistant. So why would they put the corporation and themselfs in a position to be sued later? Why were they having an open affair? not only that but I'm runnuing out of space I believe to bring more things in that I could not agree on. Also I got mixed up with all those ladies name at the bar. Who was Cookie? Was she a waitress? What about the blond wife of the DJ? Anyway I loved the story. Just got confused with some things. I think you are a great writer you just seem to forget some things in life are not as easy to do as you make them seem like. Maybe because I also represented a company as a sales director. and all my affairs were kept in secret. To many people knew me not only in the town I worked out of, but slso from out of town. So I couldn't take a chance of being recognized. And I guess thats where all this questions about an open affair come to the forefront. Like I said. This are not stupid people we're dealing with in this story. Anyway, Keep up the good work I've loved most of your stories.

She wanted to quit the FWB relationship because she wanted to make is ex-wife her office mgr? Bullshit. She was just ready to move on and this was a good excuse. No worries. The hell with both of them.

Schwanze, this was written for the kind of a mentally ill person to whom both the plot and the characterizations would make sense. For people who are not ill in that particular manner, it's, of course, pretty much nonsensical noise. If the site had different admins, it would likely feature a special Mental category, where scatological fetishists and the deeply disturbed who unfortunately haunt the corners of this category, could congregate without being mocked by the sane.

I'm not sure what the complaints are about. Hiding an affair only requires a trusting and loving spouse. Lying to someone that trusts you is easy. So, it makes sense to me that he wanted more proof and could not afford it, so he turned to the other man's wife. I liked it!

...loved the jokes. 5 stars. Thanx!

Loklie

One of his better stories. Liked this one a.lot,

I actually laughed at a couple of the jokes. I think the people who don’t like this story just must not have a sense of humor at all. And I’m not talking about the jokes, I’m talking about the story as a whole. I agree with a previous comment, this story is one of JPB’s better ones.

Tttthhhaat's all folks!

One of the best. A 5* rating. Funny, and sexy.

That's because, partially through luck, and partially through patience, he gamed the system that's set in place to screw him harder than his ex ever did, and it sounded not to unrealistic.

High 5, brother.

If you get dealt a shIt hand in life, you could only hope it worked out this well.

Damned clever.

putting your hand in candy jar and having to choose. TK U MLJ LV NV

The author's description of the cheaters being served (1 paragraph) as they left the elevator was about as good as any I've seen written. Lots of emotion, short and to the point. *****

Cheaters always get caught in the end. And after they're caught, they suddenly realize they really love their spouse. How insulting that must feel to hear.

Another no ending. :0/

He is coming out good by the way story going but I accept RAAC rarely otherwise cheaters punished painfully

Reading again, it's a shame to read one of Bob's good ones only once.

I got a little irritated early on by JPB's name choices, a la Bobby Denton, Barton Benton.

Normally, I hate it when authors use similar names, because then I often have a hard time keeping the characters straight in my mind. As it turned out, the names weren't a significant factor this time, so it wasn't the problem for me. You are forgiven, JPB.

I really liked the jokes and the story even had a good ending, which isn't always the case.

So, good job!

Even in a fictional story, why would anyone keep fucking a cheating spouse. I couldn't, even for the reason of 'trying to get my ducks in a row'. I've had one night stands, but always with a condom. There's no way that I would keep fucking the bitch without a rubber. I also wouldn't kiss her anymore. She lost that level of intimacy when she started fucking around. I realize that it would blow the plot away, but then that's the part that blew away my suspension of disbelief. (Hence 1 star) Anyone, real or fictional, that continues to be a cuckold for any reason doesn't have an ounce of my respect or self.

I don't buy the cheating ex-wife being "better than average office manager" would be reason enough to promote her and bring her back to corporate. I get that business is business, but better than average office managers can be found, and not ones that cheat with the husband.

You could have done better here.

3 stars - I also would not have sex or even kiss a skanky, potentially diseased slut like that.

Classic JPB! Always enjoyable. The comedy schtick takes me out of the story though - I start skipping ahead

Good story but get a dictionary or a spell checker.

I'm not like anon from three months ago. I like jokes and miss the Detroit comedy club from my year living in Ypsilanti. Besides, I have to get my JPB fix filled occasionally. BTW, since Bob's target audience is himself do you suppose he aways gives himself a 5?

somewhere east of Omaha

Good story, JPB. Enjoyed reading it, as I do most of your works! 5 stars!

A "Best of JPB" story.

I keep hearing about the Landing Strip.

I really want to go there, sounds like an exciting place, comedy, hot women and plenty of cheaters

This really is a good story and even my wife, who is not blond, likes the jokes.

The random jokes were annoying. I have it three stars, without the jokes it would have been four.

Well Done. Intrigued to know how it worked out with Cookie. 5*

If it didn't have all the so called jokes and filler stuff it would have been a five. They became annoying very quickly, why were they there?

But as is it was a four.

Interesting that the ex wife got promoting (on merits) so I guess she came out a winner too.

I was going to write about the constant jokes spoiling the story when a few others beat me to it. So I won't duplicate their effort even though I hugely agree. He goes to Houston, sees his wife & her boss hand in hand & cozy in the restaurant doesn't take pictures? Worse, after they go back to the hotel & sees the floor the elevator stops at, he doesn't go up after some time, stating it's room service, & then confront them while taking video? All those chances. What's the sense of going on that trip & then just look? Made no sense. 3 stars for a so-so story. Bob

Scored 3 without the jokes, but 4 with them. Thanks for sharing.

Would have liked to see the boss get some physical retribution.

Thanks for your writing.

People bitching about jokes? Personally, I thought several were quite funny. 5 stars DMW aka

Do comedy in the middle of a story destroys the continuity Clean it up and resubmit

1 star - you lost me as a reader on the first page when the idiot husband says he was still going to fuck his wife AFTER he found out she was fucking her boss. I would certainly NOT be putting my naked cock into that unknown cesspool of potential STDs. The rest of the story was a waste of time

Nice story but you go off track with the comedy and then try to get the reader back on the story after. Too much distraction.