All Comments on 'Walt and Rhonda Ch. 04'

by toomuchinmyhead

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Why is this couple married? They are both fucking other people seperately from each other. If they both want an open swinging marriage then let them have one this sneaking around and cheating on each other and insisting they 'love' each other is just bullshit.

toomuchinmyheadtoomuchinmyheadabout 13 years agoAuthor
Maybe it wasn't clear

In answer to "what are they married" - they have been married for years, and the narrative is taking them through a very recent development in their relationship, which they will have to reconcile between them.

Of course, it IS erotic fiction, and may likely develop into an open marriage, while still in love. It's in progress.

And thanks for reading

Rockyderek_caRockyderek_caabout 13 years ago
Good again

You are doing a nice teasing job as you lead us to discovering why a couple in love simultaneously turn into a couple of independent swingers. At some point though I hope somebody's lover suffers some damage.

irvlynirvlynover 9 years ago
I'm reading the series....

and while the writing is excellent, the plotting on this is really at the same level of "the pizza boy, m'am".

You know what I mean and you are better than that.

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