All Comments on 'Wanda - A Surprise Visitor'

the best i have read in along time please write more

Stick to the rape fantasies, and stop trying to assume that black people sound like you have them written. It is not very good, the storyline could have been much better without the broken english and poor attempts at ebonics. There are very intellignet black people who do not sound like this shit, and get turned off by the inference.

First incredibly stupid sentence: <i>She whispered "I think I was raped today</i> <br><br>

Second incredibly stupid sentence: <i>Another thought running through my mind was what a girlfriend told me a long time ago "If rape is inevitable, you might as well enjoy it."</i> No woman on the entire fucking planet, would say something like that. That is the stupidist single thing in this entire piece of dreck. <br><br>

<i>He pulled my head back so that there was a string of precum caught between my lips and his cockhead.</i> Trite and overused. I immediately thought, "insert stock porno image here."<br><br>

<i>He reached around my head and began stuffing the panties in my mouth. That was the first time I actually felt fear for my safety.</i> Okay, I felt relief at this sentence. The woman is not clinically brain dead, as I was beginning to suspect. She does have some limited sense of self-preservation. She's not handicapped folks, she's handi-capable! <br><br>

<i>"Shit you a nasty slut to do that, I think we be tryin that later, but for now my cock need a little rest, so why don't you come up here and we talk for a few minutes.</i> Nice racist overtones here. Black male = therefore, he obviously will misuse and mangle the English language.<br><br>

<i>as soon as he was on his back he grabbed my hair and </i> Okay, by this point, he's grabbed and yanked on her hair at least 5 or 6 different times. Can premature baldness be far behind?<br><br>

P.S. FYI, the correct spelling for "definately" is "definitely."

being raped is it rape? If you dont report the rape, is it rape? If you didnt want it but were raped and you at the end enjoyed it, was it rape? I am always curious as to how the man in the house got into the house. Did he just walk in thru unlocked or open doors, yes their are still people around that stupid. Did he come thru a window that was not closed and locked? Did he force his way by breaking and entry into the home? Makes a difference you see. One could say a person who leaves a door open and not closed and lodked invites people to enter. Almost like and unfenced pool invites people to come in and swim and drown at your fault. My self I like the breaking and entering along with the forced rape, it sounds so good in court, amkes the person sound like a real criminal along with being mentally ill regarding sex.

I liked your story but you just knew someone who does not like IR sex was going to make a stupid comment, they always do. It was hot and certainly good for an orgasm for the old lady who creamed several times reading it. Thanks.

I understand a little constructive criticism when it comes to editing, but I think some of the comments are a little overboard!

Here's my two cents' worth... I loved it! Made me wet, made me cum! There are a lot of us out there that have the whole rape-that-turns-pleasurable fantasy! Thank you for writing about it!