All Comments on 'Want A Spanking?'

Superior! An excellent description of a moment in time. Thank you.

Holy moly, you do write well.

Excellent!!!

Your male character seems to know so many ways to hurt...so many....:-)

Claire B: this was excellent, both for the erotic and the writing. I like the "voice" of the narrator including how her lover might be feeling or looking, very good technique there. Also appreciated no body type descriptions but the inclusion of stuff like the Berber carpet, the finger sucking, and her jeans bunched up at the end. I rarely give 5's, you got one! I'll read more of you ASAP. - Perdita

Not one to visit too often I come here for ideas on what next to try

This is my first comment / rating, Claire you paint a beautiful picture.

Next time around I'll keep my eyes open for your stuff. Considered working with scripts ?

Beautiful dearie

now i need to masturbate

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it was really hot! sent it to my guy friend and suggested i needed to be punished.

Well written and exactly my kink, so five stars! I will read this one again.

Claire,

This had great build and tension with a satisfying climax for both the characters and your readers. It had the perfect blend of dominance and tenderness. That spanking turned rough anal sex was HOT.

Thanks for sharing this.

i was getting a hardon reading this it was a very good story im into spankings