All Comments on 'Want To Bet (Again)?'

and put on display by your wicked girl friend is a nice start but there is so much more that could be done with this story! You've stopped in the middle in a rush to submit! A good start; keep it up! The writing too!

I like that she shows him naked around and presents him to other ladies. It is really hot that she takes nude pics of him. How humiliating and arousing!

Great fun...and extremely well written.

We especially love that you don't succumb to the 'cum scene' -gush bit.

It's lovely knowing that's inevitable, eventually...and being left, as the reader, hanging...just as he is hanging, literally edging ever closer.

Another one, please.