All Comments on 'Want to Screw My Wife?'

Nice piece of satire.

Great power of imagery.

I can just picture Earl jumping around Dave like a hyperactive puppy - next thing you know he'll get so excited that he messes himself.

Should be required reading for the simps in cuckold county.

"umm, dave's not here man.

hey, it's me DAVE. open the door i got the stuff. i saw the pigs on my way here. hurry man.

umm, dave's not here man.

no man it's ME DAVE! open the DOOR MAN. i got the stuff.

umm, dave's not here man."

great piece of satire. earl must be killed for being so damned hyper.

Good job, that was a funny story!

Loved it this was a funny story with a good meaning.

I don't vote on stories as a protest against Goblins and Trolls.That was different, different and good. I liked the way you went with the story. Keep writing!

Nice, well written story - funny as hell

All your stories are great,especially this one...keep up the good work..

the reality cards again. I don't need to tell you how talented you are as you know that.

So thanks again for the slice of life's reality amid the piles of none.

With high Regard

You keep writing them and I will keep reading. Thanks David.

I can see that goofy guy bouncing around in my mind. A funny story that puts the entire topic under a realistic light. Bravo David!

What kind of work do you & Earl do, and what is both of your levels in the office set-up?

there are idiots like the wife and husband in real life. And most of them are nothing more than virus and bacteria incubators passing infections on to unsuspecting victims.