All Comments on 'Warm'

For the read.

Lovely.

I wondered what difference there would be if the instruction came from the woman. Thank you.

Nice job , sexual and erotic and done without using vulgar words. Would love to read more

Thank you

Several times you wrote "your" when it should have been."you're".

Thank you all for the comments. Prfsr, those mistakes got by, both myself and an old editor. I appreciate your correction. TOW.

Women think and talk differently during and after sex. I great lover knows by feel how to touch a woman. I hope to read about your exploits with a younger lover and what he does for you. There are some younger men who can be gentle and satisfying to a curvaceous sexy woman.

Older woman lover...

Tantric seated position? First time I've seen anywhere but on books or DVD. The later just porn.

You described it very well but, if I may interject, isn't the lady the one who controls thae man's climax in this position? Very well described. Very well indeed.

Lee

Very provocative and evocative. Thanks for writing it.

Such a turn on

This is in the mature category, so I have to believe that one of your characters is "older". I am not sure which is which. That may have been on purpose. To me it would actually work either way. As I read, I pictured Tony as the older by about 15 years. However it could have been the other way around, with LeeAnn being older and having had nothing but inconsiderate lover/lovers, which I have found to be not unusual, and being shown the exquisite feelings from a knowledgeable enlightened lover. Either way, the story worked for me. I loved it, not as hot as some, but hot in a different kind of way.

I am sorry that my vote scored as a 4. My plan was to give a 5, but my finger touched 4 on the way to 5, and there is no way to change a vote provided by Lit.

Gives me hope for the future. Sounds like a great orgasm! Will read more.