by J-Stroke
Great story can't wait for the next instalment pleeeeease don't keep me waiting to long
Wrong words, missing words, punctuation nearly non-existent, just badly edited and proof read. The story is nice, but the mechanical aspect is just very distracting.
Jane and Sue ruined this chapter for me. Jane shouldn't have fallen for Sue, nevermind what Claire was doing.
I like Claire (and Jane) less than before.