All Comments on 'Warmth'

Hi. I enjoyed your writing and your attention to little details that revealed your character's personalities. One comment on the cabin's location. Concussions kill as the brain swells, so for him to not call 911 would mean that because of the snow, it would take an ambulance over 8 hrs. to get there, essentially removing it as an option. He was on his own.

Wow! I remember the skin-on-skin thing from my Red Cross training, but they seemed to leave out the part about fucking! Can rape actually save someone’s life? Brilliant story.

Sensually and dramatically balanced.

What an amazing story, well told thank you!