All Comments on 'Warren Butterfield Pt. 03'

you waste so much time drawing out your stories.a total waste of writing.

The plot is nice but the writing is to slow. Get on with it.

Dont listen to the silly person below.

You dragging it out, makes us want to read it more and more.

Personally, I love this story!!! I hope Trish gets whats comin to her!!!

too much. too long. the husband can't be that gullible, that stupid, and then suddenly, finally he isn't that gullible, that stupid.

The wife can't not know what's happened all of these years. She can't just have abandoned her father on her mother's say-so.

Is the mother in law the only one in this story with any brains? And why did she waste years of her own life just to make her daughter and son-in-law miserable?

No one is that evil, just for the sake of bein evil. There has to be some enlightened self-interest going on somewhere, doesn't there?

And that's all I have to say about that.

I Have Enjoyed this piece Of Work. Those Folk Who Want You to condense your Work Are Reading With Thier Hands on a hotdog. keep Up the Good Work

Why would any man or woman --- other than Jesus or Ghandi --- stand up for this guy, when he goes into a terrible sobbing fit every time his mother in law tells him he has better get used to some ideas SHE's come up with? <p>

Every single time, in this story. <p>

But this story is actually not as silly as THE STEIN, which centered around a beautiful German-made vase, brought back from Germany, when the wife and her teacher colleague chaperone some high school German Club students there (which the teacher colleague kissed and felt her a few times, but incidents which she thought better kept unknown to her husband; and if he didn't know, it won't hurt him, just like the STEIN, which she would simply give to him, making him think she was thinking of him when SHE bought it, etc., etc.... <p>

In THAT story (which, as usual by KK, was well written), the wife --- after her colleague asked her to hide in their closet and then came down to in COLD-BLOODEDly shoot her husband by their staircase as the latter was about to walk up to investigate the funny noises he heard upstairs, upon entering his home from a out-of-town business travel) --- ACTUALLY helped that guy MANUFACTURED false evidence, as well as helped him DESTROYED hers and her husband's home and other valuables (included the destruction of the BEAUTIFUL STEIN!) FOR THE SOLE PURPOSE of MISLEADING the Police, as they come to investigate the shooting... <P>

In that story, THE WIFE was told by the shooter/colleague to "wait for a few minutes," before she called 911 and/or the police.... so YOU AND I COULD TRASH YOUR PLACE A BIT, TO MAKE IT LOOK LIKE YOUR HUSBAND WAS SHOT, BECAUSE HE SURPRISED A ROBBER, as he entered your home, surprising the robber, etc., etc., etc... <p>

I am not joking here; that was what KK, the author, had the shooter tell the wife of the man he had just shot in cold-blooded. <p>

Of course, the LOVING WIFEY, as she's helping the shooter destroy things and trash their home,,,, it is said by the author, KK, that she was CRYING deliriously, giong out of her mind,,, thinking HELPLESSLY about her HELPLESS and bleeding husband, lying by their staircase,,, but she HAD TO WAIT a few minutes, as she was told, so the house destruction WOULD LOOK CONVINCING to the police! <p>

NATURALLY, the loving wifey did NOT hear/see, KK said, when the shooter WALKED to the profusely bleeding man/husband by the staircase and bent down and whispered into his ear: <p>

This is for fucking my girl in college 20 years ago! No, actually I think KK said SHE HEARD it but just couldn't make sense of it, since those private whispers pertain to her colleague and husband's college days, of which she was clewless about! Besides, she's worried to death, looking at her husband, lying there, and not able to call for help immediately, because she STILL HAD TO help her colleague destroy more evidence, to manufacture false evidence FOR THE POLICE to chase after... <p>

I laughed every time I read/imagine that hilarious scene. <p>

The wife, NATURALLY, told the police, later --- and she did it a couple times --- that she came home, JUST A FEW MINUTES AFTER her husband was shot, and she had NO IDEA why any one would come and rob them or shoot her loving husband, who likely never had any enemies! She even told her husband, when he awaken later, in the ER, that she's so sorry the thieves destroyed some valuable, as they also trashed their living room!! <p>

Of course, it is only the able author KK who's able to, at the end, have the husband lovingly cuddle the wife, whispering: <p>

"Honey, it's not your fault. You've suffered enough. Youwwas merely trying to do waht's right, even if in retrospect it was wrong, when you followed him, when you YOU TWO took a few minutes, AFTER I WAS SHOT, to trash the house, OUR HOUSE, to make it seemed like I came home early and surprised some robbers, who shot me... I forgive you, honey.... You are very loving and brave, to have cared so much about me, you cried yourself senseless,,, thus not able to think clearly, which led you to follow some silly order from that bad man in the first place.... Don't cry any more, as I can't stand it, when you cry like that. It breaks my heart!" <p>

I actually laughed outloud, when I read things like that. <p>

Guess what? NO LEGAL CONSEQUENCES, in KK's world of fiction! <p>

The police simply said: <p>

"Man, if your wife had waited one more minute, you would have died; but luckly, she called SHORTLY after she and the shooter thrashed your place, which likely didn't take more than a few minutes, as you're lying there bleeding.... You are luck, man, for having such a loving wife!" <p>

Of course, after her first few lies, when some doggedly determined detective was not willing to let it go, she finally confessed that she was scared out of her wits and simply followed orders from the shooter WHOM SHE TRUSTED. She said HE gave her a few different versions as to why he shot her husband, so SHE was not sure which was the correct version SO SHE SIMPLY WENT AHEAD and help him (the shooter) thrash the house and manufactured FALSE EVIDENCE to mislead the police! <p>

E.g: "It was dark, so I thought he's a bad man, walking up the stairs to rape YOU, so I shot him". <p>

"No, that's not it. I by the time I saw who it was, my finger had squeezed the trigger to far, so I shot your husband by ACCIDENT!" <P>

Of course, being an high school physics-philosophy teacher, the wife CONNECTED those two differing versions as to why her husband was shot and DECIDED to help the shooter TRASH their home, to convince the police the shooting must have been done by some crazy theives!" <p>

Anyway, in KK's world, the POLICE almost gave her a citation for bravery and heroism! <p>

The couple, of course, lived happily every after...

Well I have read the entire story, not going to tell you all HOW but... well I will leave my comments for later on this one.<p>

BUT someone wants to complain about the Stein.<p>

The story where a guy tries to sex up the wife, follows her into her house one day, again trying to sex her up. Hubby comes homes early, scares wife, who doesn't know who is there and stud. Stud, knowing WHO is coming home tells wife to hide, and he shoots the Husband.<p>

Wife then comes out, stud tells her they have to fake evidence. She then calls 911.<p>

And after saying she had an emergency that is life or death....<p>

She is put on hold.<p>

THAT is the time that stud uses to trash the house and ONLY after she finally gets through to 911 and gets help there does she lash out and break the Stein, the symbol of her betrayal of her husband in Germany.<p>

Wow... she was put on hold.. guess we should kill her.<p>

Next time you want to use a story as evidence, I ask that you READ the story.<p>

The wife didn't trash the house, stud did, she didn't wait to call the police/help, she called and was put on hold.<p>

Now step away from the computer and breathe.<p>

I enjoy your stories and don't consider them drawn out. I am enjoying this tale very much. Thanks again.

Really good development of story. Butter is finally getting it together. Nice to know the wife probably will still be his wife when story ends. We don't get to know her very well and our view of her is colored by Butter's interpretation of her, which is muddied by Trish.

It is hard for some people to let go from parents and the authority they used to have. Easy for a parent to take advantage of their child's love for them and abuse the love and trust. Trish is hateful as she is portrayed. Megan is not aware of the full extent of that ugly side of Trish. When she is made aware, I don't think there is any chance she will choose her mother over her Butter.

Some are complaining that the story drags or is too long. I want more!!! The more I know about the characters, the more I can get into the tale and identify with the characters. I don't read these Loving Wives stories as stroke material. I read them for the emotional punch they give me. In a well crafted story, my belly tenses and my mind reels with along with the character. How sad that there is only one more chapter.

K.K. - Thank you.

Some people just don't seem to like the build up to the final scene. That's half the fun! Excellent story as always.

This could go many different ways from here.

The problem is that some folks have read the ending

on another site and some want to take KK to task

about other excellent stories (among the best on

literotica) that he has presented with us in the

past because the couple reconciles.

To me the story is the thing and KK gives you mystery and

suspense along with finely drawn characters.

Great work! More! More!

Well, it appears that KK is going to manage to make it so that Megan didn't actually cheat, but just made some really incredibly criminally bad decisions in regards to what was important in her harriage. However, I think the last discussion between Warren and Megan should encompass exactly the situation we should have. He pointed out that she'd taken her mother's side against him. With everything else that has happened, I can't imagine there being any reason for additional talk. Warren needs to file for divorce and get his rearend out of the sling he's trapped in. Megan is attached to her mother and although I expect KK is going to find a way to open her eyes, most women who are that attached don't break the apron strings that late in life..............

Still a well written story though. I just feel that the plot isn't as strong as it could be because the characters don't seem to have any depth or ability to see beyond what KK needs them to see to make the story work.

K.K. is coming up with another excellent story, perhaps the basis of a possible movie. He's very good.

I had thought that Matthew's would turn out to be Harold but he turned out to be Trish's lover and Brandon's father. I had thought that Brandon was not Harold's son, but then I didn't believe that Megan was Tish's daughter, this from the eye colors that K.K. gave the reader toward the beginning of the story.

At this point, I think that "Harry in Virginia" is right that this is another rather typical K.K. story in which the wife doesn't not cheat but does do something that a wife normally doesn't do. Great story. It is quite "Hot" in its own way. RAG

Love It, Love it you have me sitting on the edged of my chair. I was worried there that you was going to make butter a wimp, worries are gone now. Man I can't tell you how much I love this story. I hate to see the end.

Tim

Thanks KK for finally giving this guy some testosterone. Might I suggest allowing him to hit the mother in-law in the mouth while she is being gang banged by a herd of horses.

K.K.

Great story, best one I have read in a long time. Clever little plot twist, wife found innocent of car trips out of town, but played tennis with Tredwell all afternoon despite Warren's telling her to be home when he arrives. Keep it going.

Woodbine 68

Not bad but IMHO, its pushing the credibility meter to the breaking point. Love blinds all too often but the wife is that stupid? Puhlease, and hubby? He's that much a pushover? I suppose it happens but bleh.

write a story. You ramble on and on as if you like the sound of your own words. You always seem to write about wimp or retards. What man in his right mind would let the things happen to him that has happened to buttercup...that's right buttercup. A buttercup is a Butterfield with out balls. I suggest he find them real quick of you have totally blaown it ...that is if you haven't already.

Well, mr Buttermilqtoast seems to be growing balls finally. I'm loking forward to chapter 3 and four. Hope the conclusioin is in chapter three.

what some of the other assholes think.I think that this is a great story and am very amused at some of Warrens thoughts,especially the one in the last episode whe he thought about turning Trish upside down and stuffing a bottle up her.Then in this part where he is getting nostalgic about the days when witches were burnt at the stake.Looking forward to the next part.Thank goodness there are still a few good writers left on this site.

K.K.<p>I am enjoying this story but the "payoff" is taking much too long to occur. I believe by now most readers have ascertained that this poor schmuck, because of his mother-in-law, her son, his wife and his job, is not having many good days. You're beating a dead horse here. Piling on abuse after abuse on this guy isn't making me more sympathetic to his plight. I'm beginning to feel disdain for him because of how long he has chosen to endure it. He has just about passed the point of no return in retaining any dignity or pride. It's time to either piss or get off the pot.

I'm WAAAAY past caring what happens.

Yes, the story is entertaining, and yes, the author can write it however he sees fit. And yes, it's reasonably well-written (if a tad far-fetched); but this could have been wrapped up a long time ago. A good editor could have trimmed much of the fat and left a lean, mean story that would have made me cheer. Instead, I'm like, ho, hum, maybe I'll read the next part and maybe not.

Fun to read. Looking forward to the next installment.

I, unlike some other readers, have not read the story on another site so I don't know exactly what is going to happen. But a lot seems predictable. First, everyone knows that living with a mother-in-law is bad news for a marriage. Second, it was obvious that the spoiled brat warlock was not Harold's child. I can't believe Harold, if he were closer to Megan than she was to her mother Trish, failed to somehow speak with Megan during the divorce so she would know the full story. Third, Warren really is a wimp for allowing his mother-in-law and her son to run his household. He tacitly gave Megan permission to take Trish's side because he never took a strong stand. Trading silence for temporary peace is like Neville Chamberlain's appeasement policies towards Hitler; ceding country after country to Hitler without a fight did not deter Hitler from his goals of conquest in the 1930's, and World War II happened anyway but was a more difficult fight for the Allies because Hitler had integrated the industries of the conquered countries with his own war effort. Warren's silence or his simply leaving the room was a mistake, in my mind, even before I got that far in the story. Warren and Megan had no children, so all he had to do was take Megan out to dinner to be alone and tell her what he thinks. If she lashes out, he just says, "OK, you keep defending your mother and taking her side against me. You don't want or need me in your life any longer. I'm filing for divorce because our lives revolve around what your mother wants and I don't feel loved any more." "Either choose your mother or choose me; that's it!" But Warren can't seem to get the 'stones' to do this, even though it's the obvious thing to do. My next prediction is that the recent, hot, fuck session resulted in Megan's getting pregnant, because Warren "dumped a lot of cum into Megan" when he climaxed. Along will all other decisions starting with the furniture swap, she probably made the decision to stop birth control without telling Warren. So Warren's decision to simply end the marriage will get complicated and he may find he's still controlled by the women. Anyway, such an ending would not surprise me -- if Megan did not actually cheat, a pregnancy could force him to reconcile. Just my prediction . . . I do enjoy the writing and the story even though the plot is taking its time getting to the 'nitty gritty.'

IT`s Doomsday for Trish and she better find a deep hole to hide in because Warrens Butter is beginning to boil over.

Pat

Atlanta,Ga

Original and very well written with lots of suspense.

How can you write about Warren Butterfield, (Masters Degree ???) and portray him as a naive retard in the last paragraph of Chapter 25 ???

You should have taken Butter out of the freezer before this.

Some nitpicking here:

1) Why didn't Harold get in his car and drive to visit Megan in Cincinatti? It would have been hard for Trish to intervene then.

2) When Megan raised the whole idea of having a child, Butter could easily have said "No" in a definite tone and set up the argument that would have brought things to a head faster.

I like this story very much, and those two points and that failure to provide for counseling or "on stage dialogue" to address Megan's lack of support for Warren throughout Trish's stay with them are my only criticism. Otherwise, Butter will always have doubts and Megan will do something easy to misinterpret and the marriage will fail then.

Both will be divorced feeling misused by the other.

KenL

Human Perfection is an Oxymoron.

Don't Believe Me?

I'm only human!

Its all so fucking realistic its scary.

Normally, you write a much tighter story.

I have yet to figure out who this pseudo K.K. is and why you are letting him pen this long-winded uninspiring piece of ... in your name !

One of the best I've come across in a while. Love the twist in this chapter. Five stars.

very hard to unravel. TK U MLJ LV NV

Still five stars. Still love it.

The series is masterfully written, but no sex.

Above is a statement of fact rather than a complant.

If he couldn’t answer her right there about Trish he deserves everything he gets. Stupid

Yep, Uh Huh, just as I figured. This is one of them stories that just keep getting interestinger, and interestinger. No telling where it gonna end up being. LP

The story is keeping my attention, but the MC is so inactive it reads like he is slogging through molasses. Slow moving, and the MC has to be led to everything, he has no insight at all.

Hope this long, draw out story ends soon.