All Comments on 'Was It Truly Just A Dream?'

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MickaHollowayMickaHollowayalmost 6 years ago

Really hope there will be more! Great work

oldpantythiefoldpantythief10 months ago

Very nice start. I did have one issue, when he flips her on her stomach and rips her blouse off exposing her ample breast to him, how does that work? Kind of a speed bump in the story, but other than that, very hot with promises of more to come hopefully.

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