All Comments on 'Watching'

by Heiden Lily

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
luedonluedonabout 6 years ago
Most unusual

I thought this was a particularly strange fantasy, with really complex thoughts passing through the head of the lady being watched. The natural reaction would be to be scared and appalled by the stalker, but here we have a strange fascination with her exhibitionism as well.

Extremely well written and very readable.

Lue

Ps: Vivian, as a new author on this site, might it be possible for you to put a few more details on your biog notes? I like to know something about authors I find interesting and your biog is almost blank. Somebody who writes a story like this one must have some rather unusual influences.

AlwaysHungryAlwaysHungryabout 6 years ago
I liked it

I like exhibitionism, and an exhibitionist needs an appreciate audience to get maximum excitement. And what more appreciative audience than a voyeuristic stalker?

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous