All Comments on 'Watching as the Years Pass'

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Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowabout 6 years ago

Hot.

Stopped too soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
hot

agreed, stopped to soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Definitely want chapter 2!

Won't complain about the length if you keep this going. And yes, HOT!!!

chytownchytownabout 6 years ago
Good Read***

Thanks.

ScentualEncountersScentualEncountersabout 6 years ago
Damn that’s HOT!

Thank you so much for sharing this! One of my FAVORITES! Excellent story. Wonderful build up and fantastic characters. Five stars!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More please

This deserves a lot more chapters

RodThrustinRodThrustinabout 6 years ago
Where's the rest?

I agree with some of the others. This ended much too soon. Not only more action, but more motivation and explanation from Chrissy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
MMMM PART 2 Please

Seriously i want an ending

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