All Comments on 'Watching Her'

by wankRus

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
5 Stars

As with your previous work additional chapters are warranted.

doug_noughtdoug_noughtalmost 8 years ago
Good start

...but unfair to leave us hanging here. If 'The Peep Hole' is any indication, this is shaping up to be a great story as well!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Interesting buildup........

...but imagine you're having sex, and your lover gets up and walks off when it is starting to get good. If more chapters are to come, then this is a good cliffhanger.

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