All Comments on 'Watching Her Go Ch. 01'

I enjoyed your story and the way you worked in the wet part toward the end and look forward to your development of this theme.

. . .very well written and highly erotic, with good pacing. I look forward to future installments.

Great Story...I too love the fluids of a woman.

Oh my fucking god, what a hot story. This is piss sex at its best: Hot beyond belief, very very wet (the description of her filling the sink sent me right over the edge), and with characters fully caught up in the gushing passion of the moment. I've been lucky enough to have experienced this a few times myself, but very seldom, since the (sadly few) stories of the great, long-lost Guy PeeWriter at the Sprinklesgold site, have I seen that passion caught so well in words. Long may you write, sir, and may your characters always have full bladders aching for mutual release.

What a great series of stories. I loved every single one of them. Thank you.

This was a really well written storey, teh pace was (to my eye at least) just right, not too slow to get going, but with a good amoutn of build up. And the peeing/urine was ideally taken into the storey, more like this please! cheers.

I just found this story, but I already see there are sequels to it. I guess I must read them to find out how far it goes. I needed a good piss story. I enjoy watching a woman piss too.

Wow. I'm VERY imperssed. A pee story AND it is well written. Thank you for being literate and writing about one of my favorite fetishes minus the degredation that so many pee stories involve. Keep up the good work. I'm going to read the rest of the series - Rick

I really enjoyed the first chapter and I am looking forward to be rest of the story.

Loved it have many times seen a woman piss and licked her clean its beautiful

Seen my sister a few times

Been pissed upon it is so sexy makes me so horney

i thought it was great! i used to climb up into the ceiling of a Men's public bathroom and crawl over to the Woman's side and wait for a young girl to go piss! It used to turn me on! I so wanted for a girl to masturbate while she was in there, but alas and alack, no body ever did!~