All Comments on 'Watching Pt. 04'

I haven't read any MG stories before, but I will make appoint of reading them all from now on. If this one is anything to judge, she must have a lot of avid followers.

Great continuation of your story and I hope you continue the series. When reading I cant keep my hand out of my pants I am as naughty as little Brucie

Cant wait for the next.

Well done Mary

Mary has a unique style and I love it! For everyone who feels the way I do about Mary's work check out MaryR. Mary used to submit under that name and there are many more hot MaryGrangerx stories under that name waiting for you to read them. My only complaint is that I hate waiting for the next installment. I'm hoping Malcolm gets to fuck Jennifer eventually (with, of course, Brucie watching) and then Mrs. Smith can join them in a foursome. Definitely worth waiting for!

Thank you for your stories Mary. I love the slow build up and the "old style" ways of the characters.

I very much like the gradual build-up to a grand climax. The trios interaction compliments the delightful conclusion.

Now the time to await a further adventure. . .

Been watching for this new chapter , lovely modest yet erotic style . I have read all of Mary's submissions , old as well as new . Gets my rocks off every time I read .

A good story ! I love Mary's slow and thoughtful erotic style. She has written many more stories under the pen name MaryR. Try them, you won't be disappointed. YorkshireDalesman :-)

Another reading of this story

Another great wank