All Comments on 'Watching Punishment'

Well, you did too damn good of a job making Lola a screaming harpy of a bitch-in-heat. No doubt it was to heighten the effect of the punishment, but it made for tough reading. Instead of being arousing, all I could think was did she bring a freaking ball gag along with the other things? Shut. The. Bitch. Up. Already.

And really, was this deserved? Embarrassments aside, she was defending HIM from a guy who even his own family thinks is a nutless prat. Mitigating factors.

Simply disgusting

Others are missing the point. She got off on the humiliation. That is what bdsm is. Hello, check with mr. Webster or Merriam about the definition of sadism and masochism. Now Lola did talk alot but the rest of the story is in line with bdsm behavior. The recipint is turned on by being abused. Good story. Well written. Hope to see more. I think you did the milf list too. Also hope to see more of that. No complaints. Five stars.

I loved the story, as always, perfect written and built.

What people have to understand is that every relationship is different, specially dom/sub relationships.

There's always an agreement and a limit. If it doesn't, than that's abuse. Which is definitely NOT the case.

You made it very clear that all involved knew and accepted what was happening to them.

Anyway, dear C., nice, sexy and arousing work.