All Comments on 'Watching Sis'

I really loved this story, it was great as a stand-alone, but it would also make an excellent first chapter of an extended story. This story deserves a sequel!

No loft has a connecting hatch, as for the peephole, yea alright, at least try make it sound a little plauable as at that time of night you would have been heard !

1* for effort :(

needed a follow-up, like HER discovering, unbeknownst to him, a view into HIS room and stroking activities, from the same "hatch" !