All Comments on 'Watching the Detectives'

Beautifully written, great plot line and sex scenes included where they fitted into the narrative flow - incredibly erotic. Stephanie

This was a very well written story. I thoroughly enjoyed all of it. Keep up the good work. Thank you for contributing this story here.

As ever well written with great characters. A pleasure to read :)

Great story.. thoroughly enjoyed it.. and please keep the Thailand one going as well!

Very well written and I couldn't read fast enough... you are so talented.. please write more... your story gave me more hope for the future..

My only complaint is that the story ended. I'd fallen in love with your characters & would gladly have read another 20 pages. You writing is, as always, brillinat, great plots, superb dialogue. Thanks you for this wonderful & enlightening story.

Another superb and beautiful story Nikkie.

Thank you so much Love J xoxo

Your characters are so real that it almost seems like I can hear their voices. Well done Nikkie. And the story is almost worthy of Sue Grafton or Janet Evanovitch.

So funny and touching too. I'm off to look for a follow-up !

i really loved this , stayed up way to late reading this . i could of kept reading this for ages. damn ,really wishing there was a community like this where i live . really got involved in this story . thank you xoxo.

Beautiful story. The plot was engrossing and all of the loving sensual scenes brought the story completely to life. This could - with subtle camera work - be a film I would watch. Well done x

Excellent story, well written. I suspect you have at least a fair amount of writing experience. Your descriptions were wonderful, I'm sure as you were writing you were picturing actual women. Given the expertise you obviously have with female fashions, makeup, and physical attributes typically associated with women, I will admit to being rather curious as to your background. Whether you're male, female, or tg/ts, you are talented and I hope to read more of your work.

This was a 3 dimensional story with real characters an a convincing plot. Needless to say I will start following you as a writer!