All Comments on 'Watching Their Passion'

Good story albeit a bit long for my tastes. This is the most realistic account of two regular people having sex I've seen here. Very beleivable sex scenes.

a bit of a flashback as well as I recalled my teenage years humping the hell out of my pillow.

The story was progressing nicely and the total unnecessaary mention of a brother and his soon homecoming.

This threw the story off pace and prevented a great climax.

Simply the best story on this site.

Why? Because it worked for me.

The key was the realism - it all seems like it happened. Although the brother returning to the family home spoilt the voyeur's fun, I think that sounds like it has the ring of truth to it.

I do not think the story was too long, the details added to the quality. I also find that - on the whole - the longer that pleasure is denied, the better it is when it is experienced.