All Comments on 'Water Nymphs Pt. 01'

But it was too short ... hope the next chapter comes soon.

Good plot and well written.

Top ratings from me.

Very good start. Can't wait for more. *****

but good potential,,,, maybe part 2 this year"""?????

2 star

Ahazura,

I thought it was a very good start to your story. Thank you for sharing. I’m looking forward to the next installment.

Fun start... Having trouble finishing or life get in the way?

But are you working on the Warlock still?

Don't you hate authors who start a multipart story and then leave you hanging? Good start as shown by the readers scores, now we are just waiting for the rest of it.

Start a story and don't have it all written before you start posting? A really good author, but no clue. Over two months, and no follow-up? Seriously!

A very good start to the story. I look forward to more chapters. However, you need to be more aware of your spelling and grammar - eg. ‘drug’ is to medicate (illegally) whereas ‘dragged’ is the correct past tense of ‘drag’

I always end up berating myself for starting an unfinished story... and yet here we are again. Gahhh

No part 2. DO NOT START THIS!!!!!!!

There is now a part 2. Haven't read it yet but now y'all can stop crying.

After starting to read this, is this a continuation of another story. You could have said so at the top. He had already landed on the island in the previous story, what is that one?

SO ? good start

Great story and fantastic writing! I could see the story unfolding like a movie!

This is the type excellent work offered by Saddletramp, DTiverson, Todd 172 and 8 others. KEEP THIS UP.💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💯💥💥💥💥💥💥

I see that there is a following story but hope the grammar is better. As one person noted drug is for addicts and noone should be for no one special.