All Comments on 'Waterway Wet Work Ch. 03'

by Jbrassmonkey

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swingerjoeswingerjoeabout 9 years ago
Now we're getting somewhere!

LOL! At last, this story is becoming interesting! I predict the ratings for all three chapters will plummet as a result. It doesn't even matter that this was a fantasy. Many readers here don't tolerate impure thoughts.

I still think these chapters are too short, and include too little detail and action to be standalone chapters. Yet, I keep reading out of curiosity to see where you're taking this story, so I guess your strategy works!

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Well

You be me worried there for a minute, but you kept it together.

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