by Jbrassmonkey
LOL! At last, this story is becoming interesting! I predict the ratings for all three chapters will plummet as a result. It doesn't even matter that this was a fantasy. Many readers here don't tolerate impure thoughts.
I still think these chapters are too short, and include too little detail and action to be standalone chapters. Yet, I keep reading out of curiosity to see where you're taking this story, so I guess your strategy works!