by leejames
This is a great story, and I really hope that you will continue it in the future. Keep up the great work.
~Nightime
where is the next part???? i want to know what happen next??? hmmm
You're doing great, so far. Take a deep breath, take your time, and continue on with this great story. You're very good.
Please write on. I like the story and want to hear her story. I like the cat and dog too,
please don't lose interest yet in this story. you can take it to so many places
You need to cut those huge paragraphs up into readable portions. Change of thought- different paragraph. It sure makes the reading easier.