All Comments on 'Waves of Time'

by marybethf

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Brenda

I wished i could have Brenda she sounds like someone i would like in my life i hope she comes back in your next chapter I`ll be dreaming of her in sleep.

Pat Murray

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very Sexy Story

Loved this story. Hot lesbians who love`being naked and intimate without caring if they're observed (though they are totally alone on the beach). Keep their adventures going.

TE999TE999over 17 years ago
Lyrical and Enjoyable

Superb mood setting and excellent dialogue.The ending was a bit sad, but that's how life is sometimes. A superior submittal as usual. Kudos to you, Beth.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wonderfully written

Some of the lines were so refreshing. The mention of footprints in the sand....kicking off the shorts....and the stuff about between the legs (plural) were beautifully written.

Keep it up!

Sandra

happydayhappydayabout 17 years ago
Awesome

you make feel so good, I could stroke myself

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyabout 2 years ago

The good or special times always fly by so quickly ...... Then it is the daily treadmill again ...... In retrospect such days, extraordinary wonderful funny , are rarely happened ...... Your girls had a great time 💝

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟✨✨✨✨✨💖💖💖💖💖💝💝💝💝💝

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