by Ton8ty
Good premise.
But all the sex was so automatic. No tension at all.
She lubed up his cock. OK. She never asked him how he liked what she was doing. Was this the way he liked it? Would he like it if she played with his balls?
More step-by-step details of his fingering of her asshole would have been nice.
Despite her insistance on going ahead with getting anally fucked, there could/should have been some trepidation/reluctance that needed to be overcome.
Having her asshole licked happened, but it wasn't nearly sense of wonder as it could have been.
Her kissing the end of his cock clearly wasn't enough. Cock in mouth with a blowjob lesson would have been nice.
The friend/patient coming over at the end added absolutely nothing.
Maybe she could have decided she needed another session before letting the real Jeremy do it.
Four stars.
Very solid fun story. Def would like so see it continue with her taking her new knowledge to her bf.
Very nice work. "Nipples in repose" was a well turned phrase. Enjoyed it very much. thanks
An almost dreamy description of two souls experiencing pleasure and understanding while maintaining their self respect, then accomplishing a very touching and thorough sexual adventure. Also a great clinical "how-to" lesson cleverly woven into this masterful tale. Excellent writing too. Thank you sincerely for this one!
This is a fantastic story. Wonderfully and carefully crafted, marvellous development of the characters, and fantastic dialogue! Oh, and I mentioned the sex, didn't I? Oh my god. My new favourite story…perfectly paced, and perfectly sensitively written. Mmmmmm. (I WOULD argue that there are tons more nerve endings in the anal passage than in the vagina, which is exactly why anal is so delicious). Fabulous title, too!
Way too Easy must have been way too hard to write it was too
Great to be otherwise it must have been rewritten many times to make it such an easy read.
Must have been way 2 fun to write love every word of it. Give us more like it AND soon! Where do you come up with these ideas? Are they from real life? If so how can you let us know?
How about a series of **** at the start of a true life story and hope it makes it past the censors, ok?
tmj1969
usa
I loved that story very much. You're a very vivid writer. Now i've got some cleaning to do it was that good. :)
Do continue your writing. You seem to have a natural talent for it.
I'm not into anal stories but this was so prettily written I couldn't help but get turned on. It was like watching really shiny porn - a total escape from reality. Some parts did make me giggle, but affectionately. I don't think you intended it to be taken too seriously. Lovely. Thanks!
A great story! just a bit more on tha actual anal sex, perhaps? I'd love to hear how it felt as he slid gently into her.......
I enjoyed the characters and descriptions. Fun to read. You brightened my evening. xantu
You know i have seen and read alot of anal stories in my time on literotica, but this is very easily one of the best. 5 stars for this peiece of artwork.. after all, 5 stars for 5 orgasms while reading ;) thanks and keep writing!
kessy
A great turn on. A could feel the cock fucking my ass! Absolutely the best anal story!
This is a very erotic story! I envision more chapters involving the wife, the boyfriend, the second employee, and even the friend on his way to the office. One suggestion, though: more anal sex and less superfluous filler.
LOVED IT! Sneaky doctor, naive girl, abuse of trust, and satisfaction for both. Niiiiiice . . . .
The clever doctor, the naive technician: the patience of the long term seducer. What a combination! Casanova himself was not as practised in the art of seduction.
I must say that I am dripping wet after reading that story. I loved every minute of it and am dying to move to my bedroom to fuck myself in my ass! Great job!!
Very nice seduction. Whats up with the "got to tell the wife". Let him seduce her friends to or her mother. Bring in the wife as a participant. Well done