All Comments on 'We Are Frankenstein'

by unpredictablebijou

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
SAD

THIS IS SAD VERY SAD,MY HEART GOES OUT TO YOU ,IF THIS IS TRUE AND SOMEHOW I THINK IT IS ,IF ONLY PARTLY GET SDOME HELP.IF YOU DELETE THIS COMMENT THEN I WILL TRACK YOU DOWN BECAUSE ONE WAY OR THE OTHER TOU NEED HELP

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
MANY TIMES

I have read this many many times,what on earth is the matter? Ihope this is not a sick joke,because if it is it will explode in your face.If it is not for Gods sake ,yes i said God sort yourself out.Whatever you do look at the thoughts of St Paul of the Cross.Ihave given you maximum score because only a disturbed mind could write such a thing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
ALL

I have now read all of your submissions,most are harmless this is not and neither are you ,I suspected i was right the first time ,i think you are sick very very sick to make such a story of a stillborne child.You have considerable writing skills use them to give pleasure not pain.The story content is so very true but read St Francis,prayer.This site is for erotica not to inflict pain on those that have suffered enough.

dweaver999dweaver999almost 17 years ago
Beautifully heartwrenching

The last two commentors just don't get it. You did not write this essay out of an evil or sick heart, you wrote it out of a broken and devesated heart. Of course you feel like a monster when you have lost a child, especially so soon. You have shared a piece of your soul in a desperate attempt to let those who have never experienced such a loss understand what goes on, why you are so distant, why you break down at the 'weirdest' times. The courage you have found is on par with the soldier who leaps on the grenade to save his fellows. You have thrown your broken and battered heart on the grenade of public opinion, in the hopes of saving someone from the loneliness that makes the pain all the more worse, Thank you for this beautifully heartwrenching essay. My heart goes out to you in your pain. Not in pity, not in horror, but in the hope and prayer that you will feel the love of God, who understands your pain, bitterness and anger at Him, and who cries with you and does not judge you for being the human being He made you to be.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Peace.

The comments so far on this very emotional subject indicate the deep concern that is felt by all when a mother loses a child.The dreadful feeling of loss is also felt by the father.It can shake the faith of even the most devout religous people and quetion the existance of GOD.I have the feeling that you speak from personal experience.The saying time heals every thing,does not apply to this.A very well written essay.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
I TOLD YOU I WOULD

Never mind about the person who thought I had not grasped the message I certainly did.I will contact you one way or the other.much love JIM

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

as per your "disturbing" comments which you refer to at the AH, and you ARE admittedly an attention whore, I would not worry, unless you plan on stalking yourself. It is obvious that YOU wrote them so you could bring attention to yourself. pity-full

EtainneEtainneover 16 years ago
Much Love

How incredibly insensitive some people must be to have written such horrible things to you. Of course I am sure (and hopeful) that they do not know you. And how insightful others who have seen straight to the source of the pain expressed here. Because I know you and love you, I know how deep the pain expressed here runs. I have watched you come through a long tunnel since just after that time and you are emerging tempered by the pain -- great beauty and great strength. Consider yourself hugged.

lorencinolorencinoover 16 years ago
Engaging and challenging

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First of all I can't help noticing that people who are abusive in their comments always sign themselves "Anonymous." Driven by their personal fears that they cannot understand because of their extreme shallowness, they proceed to do in writing what is the equivalent of rape. Incapable of actually evaluating the quality of the writing or the effectiveness of the argument, they resort to these gross ad hominem attacks which communicate the nature of their own shriveled souls and say nothing at all about the essay that they are supposedly commenting on. It tells me that the landscape is indeed filled with a host of sad monsters who suffer a lifetime of alienation parasitically preying on the happiness of others and creating more monsters like themselves. <br><br>

Now about your essay: Fascinating employment of Mary Shelley's story that is truer to Shelley than to these rather gratuitous Hollywood renditions that most people are familiar with. We live in a society of alienation where security is sought in the demonization of the "other." To look the "monster" in the eye with compassion in an attempt to understand the monster's sense of themselves in the world is the first step in turning the monster back into a sentient and sensate human being in the full sense of the what it means to be human and, in doing so, enriching our own selves as well. Welcoming the "other" back into the fold is the most noble action possible. It is, in fact, a moral imperative that will help to prevent the mutual annihilation that is the current trajectory of our intolerant, finger-pointing society.<br><br>

I think this essay is a brilliant contribution to the promotion of a loving world and therefore it is quite fitting to appear on a site that publishes, amongst other things, stories about making love. More needs to be said on the topic. More people need to understand Shelley's story untainted by Hollywood crap. I salute you unpredictablebijou<br><br>

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