by M8300
All that building... an only a good paragraph of Julian an him 2gether. ... come on... more time together. .. an at least give us alittle.... affection. ...
Otherwise love the bass of this story... just wish it was longer.... less rambling... more Relationship building
You've got a good start to an interesting series. I'm surprised Oliver didn't get Julian's phone number before sending him on his way. I also hope you don't make us wait forever before posting Chapter 3!
Why did he let him leave without his number? I hope you show him falling for Julian for more than the fact that he is Jace's doppleganger. good start.