All Comments on 'We Shouldn't Be Doing This'

There are no related individuals having sex here, based on what is stated.

The writing isn't bad though the story is a bit short. It sounds like a revenge fuck made romantic.

another idiot that put their story in the WRONG AREA stop posting until you graduate grade school.

To the anonymous detractors:

No, it is not incest. Yes, it is taboo. It's the right category, get over it.

And - I loved the story ... would like to see what happens, next... :)

Honestly I can't think of much I don't like about this story. The detail was really good, no excessive use of the "cock, cunt and fuck"s that make these cringey to read. The situation was believable and really hot, demonizing the wife made the act seem a lot more acceptable which was a nice touch. Above all, the length was pretty much perfect. Maybe it could of been a touch longer but I can't think of anything it was lacking that should of been added. Well done, hope to see more.

Personally, I don't give a tinker's damn what category it "belongs." It is extremely well written, heart-rate rising bit of work.

Enjoyed it.

The imagery was powerful, the writing style was detailed yet concise. I loved this, and read it twice. Please share more of your tales! ;-D

-Scarlett

By a total wanker

Mercedes ? Michelle ? Lisa ? the wife ? who are all of these people ?

This is a great scene from a story you neglected to write

That was the most confusing piece of crap that I have ever read. Who was this woman? His wife, his sister-in-law? And what the hell was her name? Next time don't eat 'shrooms before "writing".

Thanks for sharing.

Who the hell was he fucking?

And where was the incest?

To Panjetarkan:- Fucking your sister in law is no more taboo than any other kind of extra marital sex.

Cheating, yes. Taboo, no. And perfectly legal.

the person the guy was plowing was his sister, and at the end, his wife found him.

Don't be discouraged by the morons in the comments. It was very clear by your writing that he was fucking his sister in law. Nice short read.

Taboo,incest ...I don't care it was well written I could visualize what you were doing to your sister in law ,I could imagine how you were getting a bit upset when she kept talking...you wanna sink all of your cock in her all the way to the balls. Lol..I would love to know what did Lisa do