All Comments on 'We Were Dancing'

Pretty good writing.

I prefer each character to express their emotion as it drives this readers mind a little better then the narrative type writing, which gives less of a way for expressions to be voiced.

I also would have loved more of the dancing actions and the buildup of heat between the couple as they danced and teased each other into overwhelming lust.

I personally loved it as it reminded me of my wife and me getting so hot dancing for hours and being aroused for this long extended type of foreplay, till we just couldn’t wait to ravage each other.

You do a wonderful job of getting into the love scenes and the descriptions are very good.

Thank you for the wonderful and erotic romance between two lust filled lovers.

An encouraging second story. :)

Lust and an erotic night, nicely done. Thank You. Ronnie W.