by Rockwellray0
For as intense as this overall story is - this chapter was a nice addition - still nasty but with a little playful tone mixed in. Keep writing!
This is by far my favourite story. You're a talented writer and you know the subject well. I also enjoy the fact that it never gets too far fetched, all of this could easily be real. Thank you for sharing this and please keep writing!
I suspect the commander might be Hannah.
But can we get back to the online bits please?
WOW!!! This story really, really blows my mind...loving it!! Please keep on writng...and take your time to develop slowly.... there shall be like 99 parts coming! .-)
Looking forward to it getting back to the main stuff about her downfall and exposure, but I love this series. You're one of the few writers on this site who really does it for me. Cant wait for the next chapter.
Nice plot twist with the blackmailer. And I loved the skimpy bikini. I have one just like the on e in your story and it makes he feel so hot when I wear it.
Happy I found This story, especially This chapter. I love The idea is using non standard items to masturbate with, snows a good one though. Please Keep It up.