All Comments on 'Wedding Day Nerves'

by lunaswift

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peebudypeebudyover 10 years ago
not sure what that was

I love a good pee story, but was confused by this one.

It had a lot of elements to be good, mother issues, surprise lesbian friends, despiration to pee, but none of these story lines was developed.

it was also very implausible. no bride is still shopping for a dress 2 days before her wedding. and no way would she get her hair done after putting on the gown.

And I won't even dissect the bizarre ending.

That all being said, keep trying. this site needs more pee stories!

lunaswiftlunaswiftover 10 years agoAuthor
If you liked this story

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
imteresting

was good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good story

Good dtory - nice twist at the end!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
confused…

What was the reaction of her husband-to-be?

Not very likely that this would at all happen ROFL

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77almost 3 years ago

Nice twist! I hope hubby liked it!

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